Aim - The audience to come out with them question their-self and who they really are, are we told to be who we are ? have other people made us what we are ? these are the type of questions i want the audience to walk away and ask them self.
i want them to walk away feeling ....
- emotions
- self discovery
- philosophical
Theme during the show ...
isolation-shown in a scene where Christian will be trapped and cant get out this will be shown by someone going trying to get through everyone while they all make different shapes out od there bodies to stop them.
You provide some good examples about the developments of the work and your input into the scenes. You explained your input to use ‘rules’ in the work – you suggested ‘letters’ on costumes to create words within the scenes, which spell out the definition of the scene to the audience e.g TRAP. You described and explained the lift scene with Alicia including the problem and solutions explored. You explained your idea regarding the aim of the work and provided key words to summarise the aim so far. You could discuss and evaluate the scenes further e.g strengths/weakness/visual impact/energy/effectiveness etc.
ReplyDeleteAlso consider the ‘group process and dynamics’ more.
You express yourself clearly but some of your pronunciations could be improved to give you better clarity and control over your verbal communication. Overall well done. MERIT